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A Dozen Sweet Kisses

One sweet kiss, on the cheek this time,
but for you my love, I give you this rhyme.

The second sweet kiss, is to show you I care,
to let you know, I'll always be there.

The third sweet kiss, makes you weak in the knees,
and hope that you, start to fall for me.

The fourth sweet kiss, lets you know I'm here,
I'll kiss you again, until it's clear.

The fifth sweet kiss, as I hand you a rose,
this lets you know, you're the one I chose.

 

The sixth sweet kiss, makes my body shiver,

Your kisses make me weak, and begin to quiver. 

 

The seventh sweet kiss, I plant on your lips,
I feel your heartbeat, begin to skip.

The eighth sweet kiss, I've got your heart,
as I hold your hand, I never want to be apart.

The ninth sweet kiss, I start to fall for you,
little do I know, you begin to love me too.

The tenth sweet kiss, begins to blind my eyes,
I am trapped in your arms, to my surprise.

The eleventh sweet kiss, sends shivers down my spine,
Our two hearts become one, we are now combined.

The twelfth sweet kiss, decides our life,
with hopes of me, becoming your wife.

Author notes

This is to my husband ... The way I felt every step of the way ... I love you baby!!!!

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  • pominaus
    March 2, 2008
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    wow that's really good mine are pretty crap.


  • Blooming Poet
    February 25, 2008
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    this the third contest I have had this one in and i am just as happy as before to see it.

  • Blooming Poet
    February 11, 2008

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    Okay, this is great, but I have so many entries, It won't win, invite you to add this so my other contest. "My Love and My World" see my author page


  • Forgot2Breathe
    February 8, 2008

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    The ninth sweet kiss, I start to fall for you,
    little do I know, you begin to love me too.

    The tenth sweet kiss, begins to blind my eyes,
    I am trapped in your arms, to my surprise.

    The eleventh sweet kiss, sends shivers down my spine,
    Our two hearts become one, we are now combined.




    This is really pretty(you missed number six) i loved it

  • Blooming Poet
    February 8, 2008
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    This so sweet. the love and passion and devotion shiines through in each and every verse of this amazing poem. this poem shows so well what love should be.


  • Riftkin gold member
    February 8, 2008

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    a true love poem here
    with each step started with a kiss
    and that is wonderful in its own way


  • brummieboy
    February 7, 2008
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    Abnsolutely beautifully written ... a gorgeous love poem ...

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