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Forgive

I can forgive you
For loving me
Shallowly

I can forgive you
For breaking your promise
On my hand

I can forgive you
For dreaming of
Me as your wife

I can forgive you
For bringing me closer
To the knife

I can forgive you
For staining my lips
With other girls lipstick

But I will never forgive you
For lying to me
After 2 years together

Author notes

I have forgave him for a lot of shit, he didn't deserve to be forgven for, but the thought that he lied to me for 2 years hurts me more then anything.

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  • alaskanamber
    February 14, 2008

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    Aside from the content, the simplicity of this piece is wonderful. Cheating is always painful. Wanting to hold the one you love but knowing that the touch of another will always linger in your relationship. Thanks for entering and good luck.

  • Let go and move on7
    February 1, 2008
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    good poem did he cheat on you


  • Angel Wings1960
    January 27, 2008
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    This is sad, You can only forgive so much.
    Good luck in the contest