[..my life should be made into a movie<]
because this is the perfect story about love and let-down.
with the sweetest and most tragic ending
that will just leave you hanging
and hoping for a surprise scene
and praying for a commentary...
< if i could have ever gotten her to say a word..
it'd be the saddest script,,,//
//,,,oh but with the best scenery
< if i hadn't shredded up all the pictures....
there was passion and devotion
but regrets and cigarettes have long since taken their places.
there was trust and tenderness
now there's lonliness and shame.
faithfulness and promises proved to be emptiness and lies.
sweetness folded itself into bitterness and there it will stay
untill i pretty
much
die.
summer has arrived once again but the sun isn't shining as bright as it did in that little town and it sets somewhere else now. and when i lay myself down with it, it never shuts off, it never goes away. i'll take it to my grave.
//(so this is the movie life)>&&
we must've said goodbye one too many times and the miles that weaseled thier way inbetween it all finally got the best of her and me and finally made her see.
finally made me believe
the truth about true love
and how it's make believe
Author notes
love is murder.
A contest entry
- Love by Chindi Yaz.
500 points, ended February 14, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show me your best! by genevieve3.
600 points, ended February 17, 2008, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
grab your gun..
Comments
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You made my heart stop beat.beat.beating.
♥ this poem babe.
keep writing. -
awesome, unique, origonal, A great pleasure to read. You have a gift!
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wow. that was...that was just awesome. totally what i was looking for. good luck in the contest.
--Rianna
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thank you! =) i'm very happy to please
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