Passion is often considered
the basis of great romances.
Then how come I can find
Malls of people filled with passion
but not enough people with
accountability to fill a cab.
Either I am too stupid to see
all of these great romances
or lonely people have a limit
on the number of letters for any
word in their vocabulary.
Author notes
Just a thought.
In a list
A contest entry
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600 points, ended January 29, 2008, 7 entries
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Comments
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They are passionate about their own pursuits for sure, but alot of people confuse love and lust, and become unaccountable when they come up empty handed in the love department...


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I should think it would be the latter of the two..lol.
And, I agree with you. Insightful, gives me pause and wonder, as always. Jin

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Well penned but I think you can't see the forest for the trees. I think all those poeple do have passion and accountability but it's not directed to you. They each have a love in their lives and the business of dealing with crowds is a necessary evil for them.
Love,
Amera♥

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well said here again, and omit comment made to michell, apparently i have been labeled "un passions* can you believe, i was compared to someone else...omg...im dumb founded,
best wishes, i have to go sort this passion thing out, either i am or im not...can you help or maybe hire a team of experts??? Oh nevermind really, i will find the answer.
passions

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Love this thought! Passion isn't just about romance and another person, it comes from within, and is best when one is passionate about being true to one's self and others.
blessings,
Michelle

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Hey now this passion is all about romance.


had to say hi michelle been awhile.
Tory
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