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Who I was, I am, and who i will always be

I was the one always in trouble
I was the one fighting and drinking
I was the one girls parents hated
I was the one that broke hearts

I was the one I did not trust
I was the one I feared
I was the one you hated
I was the one you heard about

I was the badass
I was the punk
I was the flunk
I was my own downfall

I am the one who trust no one
I am the one who fears nothing
I am the one that cares for all
I am most of all me

I am the one who learns the hard way
I am the one who wont give up
I am the one nobody belives in
I am most of all who I want to be

I am the one to prove the world wrong
I am the one who would die for a just cause
I am the one who belives in freedom
I am most of all myself

I am the one who hides behind my tough act
I am the one no one really knows
I am the one who will never be figured out
I am the one you can call on


I am the one who has hurt many people
I am the one who is going to change
I am the one who will change my life
I am most of all the one who cares

I will be a US Soilder
I will be a father someday
I will be a husband one day
I will be strong for those I care for

I was Myself
I am Myself
I will be Myself
I am Raymond Cole Phillips

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  • love tank x
    January 26, 2008
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    Wow, I think this is one of your strongest pieces ever. The one line that really stuck out to me was "I was my own downfall". Also the very last stanza kicks ass, good job. I'm glad you refuse to be anybody but yourself; nobody should have to put on an act to please others or be accepted. One typo: "soilder" should be "soldier". Once again good job and keep it up


    • R. Cole Ph.
      April 12, 2008
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      LAte asusual

      WoW lat reply LoL anyway u went out with me long enough to know i can spell LOL any way thanks for the coment and all TTYL