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Moving to the Speed of Sound

I see your reflections in this place
Mirrored in this glowing Saint Elmo light
I catch your drifting, idle thoughts
Without benefit of your second sight
And though you sail to different shores
Listening to a different piper's tune
I bear witness to your every pain
As they rise up from inside the gloom

For memories twist the truth we share
And colour our beliefs
They move in concert to the speed of sound
Like shipwrecks upon a reef
This life is like a flashing circuit board
Overloaded to the extreme
There is no room to move about in here
Trapped inside this looping dream

I asked you for a moments grace
Before you broke my heart
But you said you had no time to spare
As you tore it all apart
My love is like a sacred heart
With barbwire as my soul
You watched me as I bled for you
Handing my heart to you to hold

I see your reflections in this place
Mirrored in this glowing Saint Elmo light
I catch your drifting, idle thoughts
Without benefit of your second sight

You watched me as I bled for you
Handing my heart to you to hold...

Author notes

love; life... whatever

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  • piccola silver member
    June 20, 2008
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    Nice rhyme. thank you for the entry.


  • Ms Raneika
    March 15, 2008
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    his is quite the wonderful piece ...I thank you for entering my contest much love, Raneika


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 26, 2008

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    You watched me as I bled for you
    Handing my heart to you to hold...

    So true and so touching ..you penned it by the tears of life ..well done...