Cold night chilly lies,
No love in those words,
Your desires chill my bone
I seek quietness,
Love, and peace,
Out landish words of lust you speak
Drives me far away
I choose not to call you anymore.
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some people sure think that a dirty mouth could ever lead to love.
Life is so good
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What I find reflected:
Sometimes people can be in 'love' with their own image of desire which they associate with another and unless this image is shared and in agreement between them, then it is left as a 'self love' which only cares for itself and not its supposed beloved. It seems to me that true love between people happens through friendship, agreement and sharing, without which all is trapped within self-concern and knows little else.
This is what your write puts in my mind and it is far more succinct than the way that I've expressed it. I think it very successful and like it very much.
Sol
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Very well said. To have a dirty mouth is so unatractive,and really shows a lack of intelect. Anyone can be trashy, but it takes feeling and respect to come up with something that is romantic and classy.
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goalsv
hi thanks for the comment, and for always being here.......
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I have found that my romantic relationships can withstand the use of almost any word or phrase ... if, and only if, the statement made is one that focuses on the partner. If the statement made is a selfish one, i.e., "lies" ... "desires" ... "lust" ... then, truly, 'tis time to no longer call that person.
he speaks just the truth to her
thus, she never needs to wonder
her desires he seeks to satisfy
naturally, no need to question why
sex is not what his words speak of
for him its always their acts of love
poet43
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POET43
Love your comment! and this is a beauty of a truth....he speaks just the truth to her
thus, she never needs to wonder
her desires he seeks to satisfy
naturally, no need to question why
sex is not what his words speak of
for him its always their acts of love
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