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Blood Shed Love

My eyes darken, like night time above
i feel the axiety in my body
I start to remeber what use to be, our love
But now, its crushed alone with your blood

You should've known, not to play me
I'm a cutter, i used it on her, you and me
I kill the one who killed my heart
Or what used to be, now it's dark

I say let me switch places with you
But not until you feel the misery
"Die!", i yell, "You *bunny* fool!"
Now, now, now no begging please

I enjoy watching you in pain
Payback's a *bunny*, aint that right
I played in your game
Now you can't see light

How does it feel to burn in hell
With, evil spirits and goons
Now, it's time for me to die
Now that i'm dead, with a shot in my head, i'll see you soon

~Joscilyn

(P.s to the readers, this is my first insane poem)

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