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199 days.

i hope you know that i would do anything
to see your face, the way your lips part
when you're sleeping, your eyelashes and
fingernails and shoulder blades. anything to
smell you when you step out of the shower.
to eat the salt that is your skin, the berries
that are your laugh.

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  • -Heather-
    February 5, 2008

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    It was honest yet a tad disterbing. Sorry about my spelling.
    Honest. Very, however I get this picture
    of you eating skin cookies. that were cooked.
    I know not what you were going for.
    However there was a move once where this guy killed
    his mom then ate her skin after he burnt them in the ovem=.


  • PrettyBlueJeans
    February 4, 2008

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    i like this and the way you just let it out in one big release of a confession instead of messing around, trying to be fancy. its perfect and completely effective in its two(?) sentences. =) loved it.