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Dancing to Our Own Beat

 

 

 

 

An impromptu ‘snap’
catches you
and your breath
off guard

as you dance
to the drum sex beat
that slowly sways
your hips

as I playfully
run a finger under,
following

subtle tanned curves
displaying neon pink
feminine lines
of demarcation and
 
I never knew
thong underwear
could be so sexy.

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  • Midnight-x-Rose gold member
    March 12

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    This is very beautiful indeed. I like the way you wrote this, it's very well done. I like the choice of words you have used throughout this beautiful piece.

  • Cat gold member
    February 17

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    you didn't know that?

    just the name alone... thong.. how did you not know that?

    cute

    m

  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    February 8

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    The read so smooth from start to finish

    Where you end the line and go to the next stanza is perfect & teasing which with this style is very fitting

    Definetly the most sensual way of describing/painting the picutre of a thong

    Quite enjoyed this read MJ, quite enjoyed


    Cindy


  • mzmikki silver member
    January 27

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    Sexy

    KissSensual and seductive!! Great write!!

  • Wild Mustang
    January 26

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    Wow, Michael. Very sensual . Bad boy . Short but sweet. Good job --- as always.


  • Amera gold member
    January 26

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    Soft, erotic with an image of play that brings a smile to the reader's face. (along with the blush)

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • secberm
    January 26

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    This is indeed well written and sexy/sensual. Your flow is consistent. You do have a way with words, a way with expressing yourself. Write on brother.

    DEZ


  • Layne..
    January 26

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    "subtle tanned curves
    displaying neon pink
    feminine lines :

    -I loved this piece, and the last stanza was wonderful...very sexy write
    -Love Layne

  • jagged teardrops
    January 25

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    wow this is sexy, lol
    speechless i am


    favoriting

    thanks 4 sharing


    jagged teardrops

  • tara wilson gold member
    January 25

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    impromptu ‘snap’...

    this little, sexy poem is just that..
    very nice..


  • Dalaney gold member
    January 25

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    Well, they are...
    this is a sexy fun poem...
    wow. Love, Lane


  • BellaD
    January 25
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    Love it!

    Ahhhh! another gem. Great verse and best of luck in the contest.


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    January 25

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    Enticing thoughts put in such a tender but sensual way. Best wishes in the contest, Michael.

    Margaret

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