When I feel the wind pick up it's breeze
I try to visualize your face, and frame
I can send love's Ode to you, if you please
On the wings of the Wind that whispers your name
May you hear my voice as I say I love you
May you feel my arms hold you so tight
Let the Wind carry all my love so true
As it enfolds you all through the night
Kisses and Hugs all sprinkled with Stardust
My body's warmth is felt in the Wind
My footsteps come running, to find you I must
For our life together is about to begin
So stand on the hill as the wind passes by
Feel all I have said, catch hold of it true
My love covers you full and complete, as I cry
My Darling, My Love let me lie down next to you
A contest entry
- Give Me a Poem by Marcus..
300 points, ended January 25, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
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the breeze is really blessed to carry that soothing ,delicious love...deserves the trophy..congrats
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Thank You nilav
for your kind comments and for adding me as a favorite. I am deeply honored.
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What a lovely piece of penning you have done
Wow seems so little after all you have written...mac
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Thank you mac
for your kind comments. I am glad you enjoyed reading my poem.
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This is so sadly beautiful! What a wonderful composition filled with great vivid glimpses of a love so strong! Amazing!
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Thank you nitefire
Your comments are greatly appreciated. I am glad you enjoyed reading my poem.
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