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No, no

I have a musician in my heart
Plucking at my heartstrings
But he cannot play
No, no, he cannot play

I have a director in my eyes
Shining light into yours
But they are not strong
No, no, they are not strong

I have a horseman in my mouth
Reining in my tongue
But he does not know how to give directions
No, no, he cannot give directions

I have a conductor in my hands
Holding them back, shaking with passion
But he does not know when to stop
No, no, he does not know when to stop

I have a Nazi in my ears
Whispering words of hate
But he will never stop
No, no, he will never stop
No, no, it will never stop

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 26, 2008

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    have a Nazi in my ears
    Whispering words of hate
    But he will never stop
    No, no, he will never stop
    No, no, it will never stop

    ah..what the take is..wonderful immagery and wondertful treatment you brought here..well done...


  • Marcus.
    January 25, 2008
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    good job