a cut on her wrist
a wish to be saved
a freind that doesnt listen
a family that doesnt care
a prayer thats not answered
nothing she can do or say
always crying
yet never giving up
her eyes a mix of green
her skin as pale as snow
wants to grow up
wants to fight the temptation
wants to move away
to be gone and alone
a bother she thinks
much in pain to reach out
she looks at the stars, the sky
wishes to fly
closes her eyes
dreams of 'what if'
she doesnt fit in
cant fall asleep
wishes to change
to be someone else
she feels irritated
until she gives up
she thinks theres nothing 'i can do'
until finally someone shows up.......
looks at him straight in the eyes and lets herself be catched...
a love she never knew excisted...
Author notes
this is about my freind i made it for her thanks for readin it please leave comment if u want to ^_^
ALSO for the contest i entered it was:
Option 3~
Things you wish you could say but can't
A contest entry
- Does the Ocean break upon your Heart? by Flames-of-Furey.
488 points, ended February 11, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poetic Death by Poetic Obscenity.
450 points, ended February 1, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - III by N e a r.
4000 points, ended February 16, 2008, 121 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please leave a comment if u have time or really like it
Comments
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Very emotional write. I can relate to the beginning and the feelings that are expressed then. The ending is pretty good, too. "A love she never knew existed" ~ superb. Nicely done!
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Thanks for entering my Valentine's Day contest, and good luck!
M a r l u x i a
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That's very beautiful. I really enjoyed the flow of things. Great write.
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This is very good however i cannot comment on this becasue I dont know which option you chose please read my rules again if you don't i shall be forced to D'Q you and its a great poem I would hate to do that.
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I love this
you have no clue how thankfull I am to you for writing this. thank you because this is what I feel for somone.bravo.
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