Why am I the one who's doin all the cryin
When you're the one who’s cheatin and a lyin
I heard it so many times before
Yet I kept goin back for more,.........
Will there ever be an end to breakin up.
When I met you I was smitten by you're tryin
To cope cos you're best friend he was a dyin
Spendin nights pacing the floor
For a friend you did adore,...............
Will there ever be an end to breakin up.
I held you through the pain and all your sorrow
swearin true that we would share a new tomorrow
Lookin through a broken window pane
I know my love was all in vane,.................
Will there ever be an end to breakin up.
Perhaps the timin wasn't right it was decievin
I should have waited till you finished with your grievin
but how was I to know before
You were a dirty son of a whore,.......
Will there ever be an end to breaking up
My eyes are red now and the lines are getting deeper
Just feel like givin up and callin in the reaper
But then I look down at the kid
And I remember what we did,............
Will there ever be an end to breakin up....
Like a worn out useless paper coffee cup...
Like a dog who gives away her precious pup.
Will there never be an end to breakin up.
Author notes
A country western type song thingy as in the style of dolly parton.
(why are they always sooooo depressing?)
A contest entry
- You like Songs? by Darkwell.
1700 points, ended April 10, 25 entries
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Comments
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tragic awesome song
you really got something here and its totally country style tragedy but you can dance to it 
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so sad... and I have been here myself of course! This almost reads autobiographical to me with the things that have happened in the last 6 months with Karl (and some past experiences too).
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