Love and serenity
wishes of peace
baskets of happiness
all war will cease.
No more sickness
no more being sad
no more jails
because no one is bad.
Utopian dreams
miracles a day
Goddess is with us
here to stay.
She shines her light
upon each one.
Grants their dreams
and then is done.
No more sadness
no more tears
a world of happiness
with no more fears.
Can't we wish
to have this true.
Being kind and unselfish
so much to do.
Make a difference
in this world today.
Clean-up evil
make it go away.
Realizing dreams
know each one's worth.
All are equal.
Heaven on earth.
Author notes
my wish..
A contest entry
- Wish On A Falling Star!!! by SummerlandRayne.
799 points, ended February 3, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful
Very creative and well done. Congratulations on the bronze.
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Actually a fun poem to read, filled me with sweet images of peace and happy days.
Congrats on the bronze!
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flow was outstanding
i like how you put goddas instead of god....maybe just maybe it will take a woman to change things around...[ smiles ]...great write
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for your info...the judeo-christian...need more of an education..neither the catholic priests nor the protestant preachers educate their parishoners..here is some info for your soul..
The first Hebrew name for God is "EL" which means "into"-a definition of direction without a particular goal (since the creator is everything and everywhere).
The numerological value of the first letter in the word "EL" is 1 and the second letter has the numerological value of 3- the idea of the one who is three, the holy trinity as in the Mobius ring when cut to 1/3 you get the bigger ring, the macro, the Creator; and the smaller ring ,the creatures, the living beings and the relation between them -creation.
"ELOHIM" is another Hebrew name for God- is it really a name?
Taking the word apart (in Hebrew) you get three words- "EL"-God in a male aspect, "ELA" -God in a female aspect (Goddess) and "ELIM" meaning gods, once again we have the holy trinity -male, female and plural.
Even the Hebrew name "Yehova" contains the words "haya"-was, "hove"-is and "yeeheeye" meaning will be-the cycle of time.
"EMET"-the Hebrew word for truth is made from the first letter in the Hebrew alphabet, the letter "Alef" ,the middle letter which is "Mem" and the last letter which is "Tath".
When we realize who we truly are, the cosmic joke will reveal itself.
The One will make the folly of war, fear and hatred evident to all of us- Because separation is the GRAND ILLUSION of it all.
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This is sweet, I really liked it.
Sooo soo much love behind this write. I really like poems like this.. puts me in a better state of mind.
Well done, and good luck in the contest!
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Your wish is beautiful...and if I were the granter of wishes...yours would certainly be granted! Thank you for this lovely entry and best of luck!!!
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yes this is lovely! and shines your spirit in it love it sissy...we are all created equal...beautiful! best to you in the contest ~blessings always~ Trisha
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