My door is locked
to keep lies outside
and now I see the truth
trapped out there
in the dark
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Incredible
Now this is a very stunning poem all by itself and it really makes alot of sense and I love the methaphorical use through out this poem. anyw ays a very well penned poem all round and keep up the excellent job
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Excellent write. Tanka is one of my fave forms. I like it for its brevity and versatillity of which you used it well here.
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I'm sorry for whatever prompted this post. Seeing ugly truth is never pleasant. Again, I am sorry for whatever precipitated this post.
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Don't be, sometimes I get bored, coughing too much i think, can't sing
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Mi querida Aziram
"Steel bolts do not a prison make nor iron bars a cage."
We lock our doors to keep intruders out but we cannot then escape whatever we have locked inside with us.
Truth however has the power to find its way out of the dark into the light and though it may temporarily be shut out, it will inevitably find its own entrance.
Applause for your thought-provoking lines and much love and hugs from el padre. XXX
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Ooh, this is a mind-twister powerful lines, huge impact sweet mommer
clappy mister dude time for you
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This made me shiver! What an impact for five lines. What we lock inside is not always obvious, either. Truth never stays trapped in the dark, though. It casts its own light. ~Karen
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some deeper thoughts in a small well made poem, each reading led me to wonder about another thought, this is excellent, thoughtful...PK
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What a poet you are (and a drama queen) I know you manufacture happiness. --- Thank you.
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drama queen, oh no!!!!!
thanks Eric
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