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cant believe

starstruck by him
beauty in every limb
i cant believe it
i think he saw me
looking from afar
gotta quit this rhyming
just burst into free verse
i saw him
and my heart fluttered
i dont even know his name
but he knows mine
i cant believe it
its happening to me
i cant believe it
i feel so free

Author notes

relly weird i know but i met alot of bands at rochstock last night and one just stood out
fallen phoenix
especially theyre bassist

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  • Piper77
    February 1, 2008

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    Great poem. I still wish I could have gone to Rochstock with you. It just wasn't at a good time. Keep up the awesome writes!

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