With how gloomy eyes,
oh sweet lady
you climb the thoughts
to tempt the busy archer.
Time might pity prevent you
from crossing the bars.
Worry not for heaven sake -
Look in thy heart
blow the spark
see the world widening.
Author notes
Picture Prompt
A contest entry
- Quickie 10/10/20 by MysticalRayne.
600 points, ended January 25, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tick me off. or please me your choice. by Black Wolf.
1150 points, ended March 28, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Wanna know what you think
Comments
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a lovely write here with a great oldie worldie feel to it, thank you for entering and good luck in the contest with this lovely poem
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very nice take on the prompt and where you took it. best of luck in the contest
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this is nice, it has that soft wording, as the old days past when things we're not so discretly told wonderful write.
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