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The day dream believer

If I were a rich man
I'd sail accross the ocean
With you held in my arms

Floating into the sunset
After a long day of love
This is what I dream of
The thing I can't stop thinking of

If I were a rich man
The thing I aspire to be
To finally feel my freedom
Across the seven seas

To feel the wind
Accross my face
Oh to be a rich man
To be in that place

I open my eyes
I'm the day dream believer
Now pushing forward
I am the achiever!

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  • celphie
    January 25, 2008

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    marc... i really like it, i dont no what it was but i felt something when i read it. well done hun, really well written.