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Gone

        -LIES-
                      and
                                /Temptations\
                                        ___
                        Surrounding in AWE
                                          in PAIN
  Taking it's grip around my Soul

                --- TEARING ---   
SHREDD I  N G              --- ripping ---
     
                  \\KILLING//
                                        ~Dying~

  I've -lost- (Control)
                          (Possesion)
                                        (Respect) 
                _____             
              [ PULSE ]
                -----   

__ I AM Gone...

Author notes

=) It came out somewhat differently because I don't have gold text editing, it had strike-outs and underlines, lol AH sacrifices must be made =D

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Comments


  • brittany.geeze
    January 27, 2008
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    Very, very interesting. Nice job, and thanks muches for entering in my contest!

  • wirez
    January 26, 2008
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    Teh Hillardz likey!