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Drinking

I stumble to and fro
As I shout the words
To God only knows what song.

Another glass
Half spilt down my shirt,
Half trickles through
My roller coaster throat.

I fumble for my keys,
And just as I get into my car
I can't remember
Who you are.

"I swear to drunk I'm not god, officer!"
My last words
As I fall
Into the leather seats.

Oh lord,
What have I done?
Who is this funny woman
Staring back at me?

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  • deleteduser
    March 7, 2008

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    This is humorous that people actually do this and don't realize the disfunction in the drink. This reads easy and makes people laugh at a true problem.