I'm settling down,
relieve...
e x p a n d
this twisted knot..
over and over
you penetrate
my deepest fears.
SMILE.
I see you, dear.
Screaming,
with that
awkward grin on your face.
you look at me..
as if
I caused
this enigma.
you look at me..
and ask
where is this
coming from?
i don't see that depth
in your eyes.
my eyes.
why would i
EVER be
that obvious.
Author notes
Too many misunderstandings...
A contest entry
- Something real by hey charlie.
300 points, ended January 31, 2008, 35 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn those greenies to Gold (or silver or bronze) pt II by whispernthedark.
440 points, ended February 8, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Brilliant. This poem struck me as a bit ominous..my day has been a bit strange. It suited it very well.
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I like the format you wrote this in, great write. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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jenna, this is really good. the scheme of it is simply beautiful. it's really well done.
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i like this, for some strange reason.
it is everything i am yet everything people fail to see in me.
i like your display picture.
welcome to AP.
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i just found this site through a friend. i know my poetry isn't great or anything, but it feels good to vent. thanks for the comment, i hope to write more soon.
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