Despite the hurt you gave to me,
despite the endless tears I've cried,
I still hide behind a friendly smile
to mask the aching loss inside.
Oh, every day I've missed you,
even when I cursed your name;
though the pain wretched in my chest,
I loved you all the same.
My anger has melted into sadness,
my hostility has long been worn,
and my hollow ribcage is aching
from the bleeding heart you've torn.
(Can you sew me back together?
If I plead, will you do it then?
Please, pick up the broken fragments of my heart,
and bring me to life again!)
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Recently, my heart's been torn out by the seams, and the boy who did it doesn't even care that he hurt me.
I need something to snap me out of this depression I'm in.
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angstily brilliant
This is good. This is REALLY REALLY good. He DOES carethough; of that I am sure. And so do I . . . so toughen up bella ^_^ -
Wow, this is very deep and sad!
Sorry that you had to go through
such a time like this in your life.
I hope that your future is much
brighter and moving for you. Take
care and thanks a lot for sharing
your talent here!
Jeremy0826 -
Wow! You know, I can relate to how you feel, EXCEPT I am the one who caused this to her, not the way you are.
I hope you can cope on with this "hurt" and I say emotional pain is the worst of all pains to suffer.
I can feel your all your pain, all your sadness, all your desperation, in this poem, and I know what this is like, because I hate going through it too.
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