…how can I describe it?...
the way your eyes melt
at the sight of me
is like liquid glass
in a cryptic ocean
smooth
and
soft
the way your eyes melt
at the gaze shared
is like your inquisitive eyes
speaking love
requesting love
touching
and
tender
…like when…
you stroke your fingers through my brown hair
we take a picture together and laugh
your arms reach out
and
pull me into a kiss
the way your eyes melt
at my touch
is like your simplest hug
melting
and
molding
into each other’s hearts
until we are
One
Author notes
Wow. Haven't written about an experience like this in a long time. I used to marvel at Brandt's blue eyes, the soft expression. I'd never experienced it before. Anyways, interesting thoughts... old thoughts.
A contest entry
- Love is Missing ??? by knot2tangled.
525 points, ended January 29, 2008, 14 entries
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A comfortable love - easy to slip into!
Your line: is like your simplest hug
So true, it is only the multiple little things that make up the magic in life.
Thanks for your poem.
Knot
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i think it sounds like somthing you enjoy and long for but haven't found it but this is how you imagine love.
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Cool
Its nice if you like that sorta luvyduvy stuff...
but lately thats been... unappealing... Its a great piece though. good job. -
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How odd considering you are dating and I am not... Well... hope that changes?
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ya
hmm.... odd... I guess...
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This is very beautifully done. The ending...just so simplistic, yet holding such a complex aesthetic feel. Love it!
.:All The Best:.
Andro
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"Complex aesthetic"! That's poetry in itself. Thank you.
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