Without you, where would I be?
Without you, what could I see?
There is no other comparison of beauty, never,
Love lasts for an eternity, I will love you forever.
Oh how love is wonderfully blind,
Your gentle heart of mercy ever so kind,
Cast your ever beating heart to I
Bonding us together until we die.
Always gazing into your blue eyes with wonder
Throws my sense of reality asunder,
Thinking 'how gorgeous is she?"
Forever happy with you I shall be.
In your prescence I blossom well,
I worship you, so much, as you can tell.
When we part I wilt and wither,
Sends so painful a shock, it makes me quiver.
So to you, this message, take heed,
It is you alone I need
I care for you, I do, I do
So please understand, I love you, I love you.
A contest entry
- finding love by Hecate616.
350 points, ended March 17, 2008, 143 entries
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Comments
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I like how you mark the beginning and end of your poem by the simple repetition.

