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I Love You

Without you, where would I be?

Without you, what could I see?

There is no other comparison of beauty, never,

Love lasts for an eternity, I will love you forever.

Oh how love is wonderfully blind,

Your gentle heart of mercy ever so kind,

Cast your ever beating heart to I

Bonding us together until we die.

Always gazing into your blue eyes with wonder

Throws my sense of reality asunder,

Thinking 'how gorgeous is she?"

Forever happy with you I shall be.

In your prescence I blossom well,

I worship you, so much, as you can tell.

When we part I wilt and wither,

Sends so painful a shock, it makes me quiver.

So to you, this message, take heed,

It is you alone I need

I care for you, I do, I do

So please understand, I love you, I love you.

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  • cyanastropyre
    August 23
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    I like how you mark the beginning and end of your poem by the simple repetition.