A deep love for one another
A deep love for one anothers bodies
Lying entwined, arms around
Holding hands
Looking into eachothers eyes
Knowing exactly what the other is thinking
The warmth of eachother
The smell
The taste
The quiet breathing
Hearts beating, beating for eachother
Eyes closing
Sleep gently caressing them
Never wanting their moment to end.
A contest entry
- Do you love? Prove it. by Turning-To-Dust.
500 points, ended January 28, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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This was beautiful, you captured a moment so well, this was absolutely lovely,
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This poem is absolutely awesome. You did a fabulous job with this. Best of luck to you in the contest. God bless you always. Keep up the excellent poetry my fellow poeticly gifted friend.
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Beautiful moment captured in time.
Lovely write.
I love to experience things like this
to store away in my memory box.
Thanks for entering. Good luck.
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So simply and yet so touching.
This is an example of a simple piece of poetry that really gets across to the reader.
Thanks for entering and good luck.
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