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I'm Sorry

I think of all the times I've hurt you

All the times I've made you cry

I hate the way I shout at you

I really don't know why

I really get so angry

I really get so mad

I never want to lose you

As you're the best thing I've ever had

I want to be with you forever

You're the only one for me

I never ever want to hurt you

Please always stay with me

So, baby I will say I'm sorry

I know I'm in the wrong

I will never argue ever

Or we wont last very long

So, baby darling sweet of mine

Remember you are always loved

You are the best thing in my life

You are my beloved


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  • leander gold member
    February 12, 2008
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    This poem radiates a very beautiful and tender message to the one you've written this for. Allthough there is a sad edge to the write, you managed to express yourself very clearly.

    It felt a tad bit cliché tough, but the most important is that you got to write this off of you.

    Thanks for entering the contest, I wish you the very best!
    Leander


  • N e a r
    February 3, 2008

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    Aww, this is so sad and bitter-sweet. I can feel how sorry you must be towards this person.
    You have a good beat and a nice flow/rhythm for this poem. I enjoyed it.

    Thanks for entering. Good luck.


  • Stormy Days
    January 28, 2008
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    thanks for the entry this is very good


  • Mykeee
    January 26, 2008
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    Thanks for your entry