Visions reaching beyond life
seeking clandestine revelations
quiescent promises
resplendent allusions
environ our jejune significance
lost aged beings
spiritual epiphany's
eternal
souls transcending
temple filigree.
In a list
A contest entry
- twenty five by AJ Morelli.
2500 points, ended February 16, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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thanks so much for entering such a lovely entry in the contest...
al -
Spirituality is personal always evolving as we grow wise words you have presented HH lingering thoughts to ponder in those quiet times
A very nice selection of vocabulary makes it just that more interesting....nice take on the contest prompt. good luck in the contest.
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Clever and smartly written
Such a great word, Incessant..a word of imagery and
impact, evoking varieties of feelings both light and
dark. I can't wait to read more already!
Very cleverly written !
(I was secretly wishing though..that you would have
given us one more line...of what all that meant to
you...or leave us with a powerful question that
we asked ourselves incessantly)
Very smartly written.
ears2hearyou
Kathleen /Seattle.
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Ohhhh! This is so wonderful! I love the flow, the imagery and the wording you have chosen! Being a lover of words I found this piece especially delightful as it tweaked my word curiosity.........thanks for sharing and yes, I agree! You deserve the gold trophy on this one!
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I agree with the previous comments, very deep beginning and zen-like. I love your word choice as well. It's not so overpowering with large words, but at the same time it's enough to make it deep and thought provoking. Beautiful imagry.
Keep on writing!
Blessed Be! -
Start of this write is deep, so much said in so little words. Great word choices. I agree with P>W --very zen like.
Peace ~ Mia Linda
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Wow
Poppa,
This is amazing. Superb. Just.. Awesome. Breath taking and mind blowing. I really really love it. Good luck! I hope it wins.
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Love you loads,
Ducky
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This is superb hun, your brilliant word choice just sets this piece ablaze... not many can do it as you can, I expect this too have a shiny trophy of the gold kind when I come back to check, very zen like and thought provoking... masterpiece
Karen
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