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All I need

My heart stops beating,
But my love goes on,
Not resting nor dying,
Just reaching out for you.

Sitting here alone,
Wishing you were in these arms again,
Safe under my eyes,
Watching over you always.

Won’t ever let you go,
Can’t after all the times I’ve lost you before,
Escaping at every opportunity,
Regretting it every time.

All I ask for is you,
All I need is you,
Yet I never seem to keep you,
No matter how much I love you.

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  • Tortured Poet
    February 7, 2008

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    awww

    this is sooo sweet! I wish someone would write a poem like this for me! That is sooo cute! good write!


  • Shadow-Stalker
    February 7, 2008
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    the funny thing is that i know things and that this is a load of lies


  • knot2tangled
    January 29, 2008

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    Oops!

    Sounds like you've lost the love of your life.
    Maybe it's hardest to keep the loves that are the deepest. But then those are the ones that hurt us the most in return.
    Thanks for your poem.

    Knot

  • celadia
    January 25, 2008

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    I actually liked this but was a bit confused, if his heart stopped, he must be dead, am I missing something.


  • creationsfromheart
    January 25, 2008
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    This sounds like such desperation, for a love, sad ;(

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