The end is so dark yet so near
We dream of sweet release with no fear
To go so soon would mean we surrender
Weakness in our dispear as all start to hinder
Don't lose the fight that lives deep in you
Your love is like a firey pit dwindling from view
The clock ticks its daggered hands
I close my eyes from these red bands
I scream to heaven and hell
I emplore with these tears that fell
I reach out all the strength in me
Holding you close to set you free
I will fight
With all my might
Stand tall
Kill them all
These demons fall
Fear is small
Fight
Fight for life
Fight for freedom
Fight for love
Fight, Fight, Fight
Author notes
To all those weaken by the demons in our head. Stand with me to kill'em all. F*** this torment. I say FIGHT!
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Everybody has demons they need to fight so thanks for writing this piece. It was really good. Keep up the good work.
Anaiya Illyria -
i really enjoyed this poem. it's true, we all need to fight back at those evil demons in our head.
"The clock ticks its daggered hands"
"Holding you close to set you free"
i really love those two lines. =]
keep up the great poetr -
Great!!! we need to fight them otherwise we will get no where in life!! like the person said underneth u speak sincerely here. the flow was great and i could see a bit of anger.great x x x check my poems oout
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Awesome!
I really liked this poem. You seem to really be speaking sincerely! My only observation is that sometimes you seem to force a ryhme, I would suggest trying not to ryhme so much and explore that type of style. Anyway you have a great voice and your poem inspired me! -
Excellent!
This was an excellent poem! Thank you for writing it! You are absolutely right, we must fight with all we have. Sometimes we lose, but still we must fight until the end. Excellent poem my friend!
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