"It will be as if I never existed,"
No it wont! Don't you see?
I'm changed,
You changed everything,
You were my life,
Why are you doing this?
You take my pictures and my song,
Like I could forget you,
I can't stand this pain!
I had a choice, nothing or pain,
I chose nothing, the pain is too much,
You never told me everything,
I hate being human! You won't change me!
"It will be as if I never existed,"
No it won't! You don't know what it's like,
To have true human feeling,
Only you made my life bearable,
I said I didn't care what you were,
I still don't, but I guess it doesn't matter now,
The cold, icy stare, expressionless,
Permanent in my mind,
I can't remember your velvet voice,
I miss you beyond all rational thought,
You became everything then nothing in a moment,
I'll do whatever it takes to bring you back,
Into my empty tear-stained world,
I'll love you forever,
I know deep down you love me too,
And you're my immortal,
I know you feel me,
Even though you don't want to,
You can't take away my face
From your memories,
Will you love me til forever?
I thought I heard you last night saying,
"I'll love you til the day I die,
And that my love, is never,"
Author notes
"It will be as if I never existed," option 6
Ok I edited it a little for you, and hope these small edits will make my poem better I added a few verses and I know you probably think the last verse is cheesy but come on, He will love her til the day he dies? And he's Immortal??? That's true love folks!!!
Twilight/New Moon/Eclipse poem Bella to Edward,
A contest entry
- Stephenie Meyer's Based Series Round 2 by LoneFairrie.
525 points, ended February 18, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I have finally found the problem in our relationship...I am to jealous of your ability to write better than me! There that is it. That is why it takes so damn long for me to write you something because I am suck!!!! and a few extra !!!!! Suckage!!!
I am okay now....I let it all out...We are back to normal. -
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Lol whatever you are a great writer!
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VERY VERY AWESOME! I love the edited version even more then the original. Yes it is kinda corny, but hey I love corny
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Oh no not cheeky! I acctually was looking for this qoute but I couldn't find it then I got distracted by other qoutes I loved! If you could tell me which book (I think it was New Moon) and which page I'd appreciate it!
This was an awesome poem and I absolutely Loved it!
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Very Emotional. When a poet can make the reader feel their feelings they have done a good job. Intense and well done
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this is a powerful write and i love the words and thoughts in this.people always try to destroy who we are.well done
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I like this in life the people that are to help you and be there for you are the ones that can destroy you good piece thanks for sharing much love
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