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Dream Of You

Dare I say it was you who came last night?
Red my thoughts and feelings of my mind
Everything I wanted in my life
A love that nobody can define
Me and you forever unite

 

On every single breath I felt you

Falling in love with you in my sleep

 

Young and beautiful you were

Observing you, touching me, kissing me

Untouched by anything dark you were

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Option #5

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  • Jocilynn Destroyed
    January 30, 2008
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    Short and sweet

    I like it, its cute. Good job and Good luck.

    Much love and Respect,
    Joci

    • Latradi
      January 30, 2008
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      Thank you very much. And what a wonderful idea for a contest, my dreams have been an inspiration for some of my pieces...

      Take care,
      Latradi


  • Jocilynn Destroyed
    January 29, 2008
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    before I judge

    please put which option this is under in your author comments

    • Latradi
      January 30, 2008
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      Oups... Sorry I thought I'd put the option in the author's note..