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Hymn to Nyx

"... in hours, days, years
            Driv’n by the spheres
Like a vast shadow mov’d, In which the world
        And all her train were hurl’d...." H.Vaughan 1621-95


a stare that goes deeper than the saturation of my ignorance
tempered by the soothe of dreams spent in your arms
stays with me
and is the last bastion of healing

such is the origin

such is the impenetrable mystery

Nyx, whose quiet companion is the dew,
thine quietitude of waiting space
  wisdom unfathomable
    vast presence,
              thou calm inexorable pulse of night.

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  • Myjoy gold member
    February 6, 2008
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    This is really beautiful. It does stand out from the others but still like some missing the historical meaning of who and what she is or is not. I really did enjoy this though and from what I have found in the research fits well on a softer level.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    January 25, 2008

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    I like the way you've written this, it stands out for the others so far. Great read, good luck in the contest with it