we caught each other falling from heights
unexplained ~
drifting to the sound of no return
in a mixed up way of life.
We exhale dreams and breathe in
the scent of ever more
with only two beats in a colourful affair.
There's a depth of someone like a shadow that dwells
in between our souls and outside of here ~
Though we fight of smoke and allow our hearts to dance...
Author notes
option # 3
A contest entry
- Quickie-10 lines-10 entries-48 hours by Lady Nightshade.
600 points, ended January 29, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Excellent
Wow, what great flow of thought, so creative and masterfully done. Best of luck in the contest.
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which option is this?
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this is such a beautifuland gentle write your words holdsomuch depth to the prompt.wel done and best of luck
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Nice one hun, this is another wonderful take on a prompt, you always do these quickies so well, I hope this one does well for you in this contest, it surely should
Karen
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