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Masquerade

playing with colours
parading among strength

dress-up games
in la la land

don't turn on the lights ~
                         you'll see me

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  • Naridill
    February 1, 2008

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    isn't that the truth most days. A beautiful metaphor - enriched and simply stunning.

    Thanks for entering,


  • Winterbirdie
    January 31, 2008

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    the ending was great! it brought to mind fairies and beautiful mysterious things =D great write and good luck in the contest!


  • SignifyingNothing
    January 31, 2008

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    Wow, I really like this. The ending is powerful. It's kind of similar in theme (though very different) from a piece I wrote about 'masks.') Playing dress up to hide the real you, not wanting the person to truly see who you are. This was really well expressed. Good luck in the contest.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 25, 2008

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    oh this is such an amazing write your word choice for this is so profound and amazing.best of luck always


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    January 25, 2008

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    Oooh I like this one best from the ones I have read today, beautiful word choice, well done and goodluck in the contest

    Karen

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