Loneliness has left it's mark upon her skin,
Loving her only one so tenderly she felt of giving in.
The glitter that sparkled brightly gave her peace,
As did it's love give her an ectasy of relief.
To feel the loving touch of her one true love,
She was soon to be free into heaven above.
With bright white wings made of the finest feathers,
She would finally end it with them still together.
No last thoughts for her soon to be broken hearted,
No last attempts to strive for the soon to be dearly departed.
A lasting gasp of the freshest air that chilled her cold,
How dearly and carefully her love had tried to hold.
There was no-one left to save her soul now from this hate,
Holding her one true love she could feel her quickening heart rate.
One final word that left her cheeks stained with tears,
For the love she had was so forbidden for all these years.
She kissed her blade as tenderly as she could bear,
And ended her life with one last sob of despair.
Author notes
In this contest I want you to tell me what state of mind your emotions are in:
4.Broken Hearted
6.Lonely
Ex-Poem.
Blade=her ex.
my ex, seeing as though i haven't touched one in a few weeks...
Her one true love was her blade if you didn't quite get it.
A contest entry
- Emotional State Of Mind " with options" by CherryOnTop.
700 points, ended January 27, 2008, 33 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ALL ALONE!!!!!! by kales4.
375 points, ended February 15, 2008, 30 entries
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390 points, ended January 30, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Insomnia is slowly killing me.
Comments
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this left me at a lack of words.
This is beautful. thanks forr enteriing like suggested.
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You should entewr this in my contest
"Missing You, My Beau" -
Thank you for entering my contest! This was a very good poem. Good Luck!
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Man this is so intense and dark.I hope that your heart will mend and your pain will ease.Thank you and good luck in my contest.
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