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what I'll never see

You can be influenced by everything you see...
When I see you it's as beautiful as everything I'll never see

A contest entry

Read with an open mind just as I had when I wrote it.

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  • Naridill
    February 1, 2008

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    Aw ~ I agree - the only thing that spun around is the repeating of words but apart from that - you dug deeply.

    Thanks for entering,


  • Winterbirdie
    January 31, 2008
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    AWWWWW =D this is adorable! =)