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Mistress of The Night

I am the mother of misery,
the birth of the Fates.
My children, numerous, famous
yet I don't share in their light.

I, the mistress of the night,
constant companion to shadows.
Everywhere and nowhere all at once.
Sleep and Death follow in my wake.

Three dimensional,
but only see one dimension of me.
Not all gods are from the same mold.
I'm not bad, just written that way.

A contest entry

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  • Myjoy gold member
    February 6, 2008

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    I really liked this one. It is simple yet complex. Well done and good luck in the contest.


  • grannyeri gold member
    January 27, 2008

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    Liked the flow of these lines, and the ease with which it can be read, good rhythm in these verses -


  • Lyndon gold member
    January 25, 2008
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    Lady Altheia

    with such fine verse you are indeed a "Mistress of the Night", and a wonderful goddess.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    January 25, 2008

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    A wonderful piece, think I like this goddess. Best of luck with this in the contest