Open your eyes,
Wake in this day dream sonnet,
My face covered in the pillows..
the sun comes busting in my room.
"Today is going to be a good day LaNae"
the voice speaks to me,
A sudden Jolt to go potty,
as a daily routine..
I get a feeling, that has not stopped,
constant adrenaline rushing in my veins.
I grab a test,
Assuming i am not.
the tensions rising,
as i wait for 3 minutes like it says.
I uncover it with Quick surprise..
positive.
Help me, I've done wrong,
Its worse than the time before, at freshman prom.
I'm 16 years old,
Now in 9 months i am going to be a mother,
my stomach will swell,
my body will hurt,
My boyfriend..wont Believe it..
Omgosh what do i do?
Today i will do nothing,
but plan my heartbeat for two.
Author notes
i'm not preg but i thought i was.
Its not easy flowing.
but whatever did my best.
A contest entry
- Babies and Parents by Billythekid.
1600 points, ended March 26, 2008, 20 entries
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Could you please put which option you used. It seems very obvious but I would like to know your point of view.
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what point? of the story?
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You really captured the unsure feelings of finding out if you are pregnant or not.The last two lines are especially great. Thanks for entering.
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