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Set in stain

Wraped in solitare...
left to long inside illusion
I have become leary of an absolute conclusion
Water is as I...
I will crawl and cover
as an over fatuated lover
Apathetic nauture I cant atain
emotion is my tormenting stain.

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  • Creatress
    April 19, 2008

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    I hear ya, she sure can leave a mess. I dug this. short and sweet. "water is as I..." loved that. great write, enjoyable.
    Creatress


  • Ishtar
    January 24, 2008

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    Now I remember why I loved your poetry.
    Miss reading your work, old friend.
    Nice to see you post.

    -Reni