i know how hard you must work to get the job done every night and day
i know its been a long fifteen months that you have been away
keep you heads up because i am right here if you need me to hold your hand
just call i will always lend an ear even if i do not quite understand
i will always be around to be on the other side of the tunnel being your guiding light
for all my brothers and sisters over seas we are here loving you every day and night
Author notes
i was in the military so i have a lot of friends who are truly family to me that are over seas so this is my pray to them..that i send out every night to god
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please let me know what you think for i have put my heart on my sleeve in this one
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This is lovely, and I really like the idea of you repaying their favours to you -
In that you see them as protecting you and the world in which you live, and that you then repay them by offering support and love!
Nicely thought out - thanks for entering
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You did a wonderful job.. The vivid detail and emotion that you put into your words were really heartfelt.. I really liked this.. Thanks for sharing.. best of luck..
Angel
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Thank you for entering my military contest. I must agree with you wholeheartedly. No matter how much you are against this war, we must never cease to support our troops that are over there.
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i like it it has a lot of decrpiton,
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Thank You
I am blessed for you entry and I know that your prayers are heard and responded to in the way they are meant to. May your days be full of comfort and love.
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