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Backbacks

Thrown aside
Kicked around
What to do with myself?

At the store they pick me up
And love me like a baby
I'm happy being bought is a rather joyous occasion

But after a while I mean nothing to you
Dumped on the dirty floors of your school
Stolen and hung from doors

What am I to you?
I'm your backpack
I need some love

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yeah this was interesting

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  • greatperhaps
    January 27, 2008

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    ummmmmmmmmmmmmmm ok. first off it bugs me that you didn't spell backpacks right in your title!!!!!!!! but beyond that it's good. Good luck n the contest!


  • Emerald Lass
    January 24, 2008

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    I love it when backpacks talk...

    Every backpack has a story to tell. Your story is excellent and should be included in a book of backpack talk. Thank you for your imaginative dialogue that brought a smile of satisfaction from me.