I fall to
p
i
e
c
e
s
just thinking about
{{You}}
My heart grows
H.E.A.V.Y.
whenever I SeE you across the
r....o....o....m.
I can't S.t.O.p
thinking about [[you]]
F.O.R.G.I.V.E me,
for thinking you were the
O.N.E.
Because after all this time,
I know.......
You were just you.
AND I DON'T LIKE
-Y_O_U-
I think I only like the F.A.C.T. that you were
A god to everyone,
&& that's who I wanted.
E.X.C.E.P.T.
The thing is
YOU are hiding behind that silly
M.A.S.K.
Author notes
I hope you like this.
A contest entry
- {D.i.r.t.y.\\P.r.e.t.t.y.} -Options- by brittany.geeze.
300 points, ended February 5, 2008, 6 entries
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Comments
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wow this is amazing, a really truly written [or is it wrote.... either way] one...
thanks for entering it in my contest.
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Wow i love this...i can sooo relate to every word of this...i especially love the long pause before the last word...it really emphasizes it and brings it out. Great write!
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