on the
living room couch,
a pillow and blanket
lay beside me
it’s only a door,
that keeps
us apart.
A contest entry
- share 10 words........... # 2 by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended January 24, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Knock softly and ask to come in for another pillow, then say "I am sorry".
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Who needs a blanket,lol open the door...lol good job on this, good luck..MM
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This is definitely a gold winner...
in ten words you painted an entire
moment in two lives, and with so
much impact. Bravo, sweet Poet.
Love, Lane
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Awwww..Why didnt you say something..I would have left the door open..
This is so sad...but written beautifully.
Soulful Woman
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oh my goodness...
you ARE a poet, sir!
CONGRATS on the well deserved gold...this is worthy indeed...
wow...only a door...
this is excellent handsome!!!
Blessings! Tammy
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sadness
That door can seem thick as hell too.It's lonely in an argument like that. This speaks volumes about love and a fight. Congrats on gold!
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Congratulations to you on your Gold Mal!
Well done and well deserved!
Jeremy0826 -
*sigh* This is just beautifully done.
Congrats on the gold!
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oh wow this grabbed my attention... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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Great job with this one my friend!
Wonderful thought for this prompt.
Good luck to you and thanks a lot
for sharing it here!
Jeremy0826
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