Like an eagle
soaring through the sky
I am free!
Author notes
10 Words
A contest entry
- share 10 words........... # 2 by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended January 24, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pimp up my prewrites by leander.
650 points, ended February 21, 2008, 108 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Friends, I appreciate your comments and review on this write. However, please do not add my name to your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!
Comments
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Many people wonder how it must be to fly through the sky on their own power, without being reliable on plains and stuff. This is short, but you have managed to capture that feeling quite well actually.
Thanks for another entry in the contest!
Leander -
Woooooo - Big bird!!! Great way to add imagery to the words to 10 word prompt. It added un written words to the whole piece. Nicely done.
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I love this, and the back ground is beautiful, best of luck in contest
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WOW this background blew me away! And your words did the same thing too...excellent! WOW best to you in the contest~ blessings always~ Trisha
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Simply lovely, my friend
Very peaceful 10 words,
nice to read something so light and soft and warming to the soul.
Great job, as always
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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lovely...
and inspiring words, sir!
very well done...
indeed...freedom is something to be celebrated!!! and APPRECIATED...
Blessings! Tammy
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Beautiful and very uplifting...
Anne
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well mr poet man...you always write tremulous thoughts and seem to whimper all the ladies...bravo to you...mr wonderful...
Mal
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beautiful imagery... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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