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A Birthday Wish

So this isn't a fantastic present
Like fire was to man
And I'll be truely honest
This poem wasn't planned

I wanted to let you know
You're a very special friend
And it took my fifteen minutes
To get these words penned

I hope your birthday's great
Along with each one after
And always keep your life
Filled with lots of laughter

Author notes

I wrote this for my friend Sonya literally fifteen minutes before I left for her party. I think that it's the quickest I've ever written a poem, ecspecailly one this good.

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  • SomeonesToySoldier
    September 8, 2008

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    Its pretty good. Sounds alot like what you would read on a halmark card. thank you for entering my contest and good luck.