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ahead

ahead,
painted sky,
pwllheli harbour,

centuries awaiting
our dusty feet.

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  • Ooooh neat-o What's pwllheli (and how the heck would you pronouce it? XD ) The ending reminds me of Egypt. Probably not what you were going for, but it's a good thing for me! I wish I could write masterpieces in ten words! Another hawt one lololzzolo!
    Jeanette*~

  • hey thanks for that commet ill make sure ill do that

    • hiraeth
      April 27
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      You're welcome. I look forward to reading more of your work.

  • Malabu
    January 24

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    lol...im asking the same thing....lol....this got me going...lmao...ok im stumpped? what is it?
    a place you go fishing? lol....congrates on the silver too...


    • hiraeth
      January 24
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      pwllheli's a town in wales. i don't fish there, or in any harbours; i just like to stand by the water and stare at the horizon for hours on end.

  • Gypsy-Princess gold member
    January 24

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    what is pwllheli harbour? This is an intriguing and thoroughly grasping write... x Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.

    • hiraeth
      January 24
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      pwllheli is a town on the llyn peninsula in wales.
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