My life has
become torn.
Nine inch nails are being
driven into my skull.
What am I to do
with my life now.
Everything I do is
just a joke of who I am.
You want to burn
me on the inside.
I know I am one step closer
to finding out who I really am.
Yet you give no
space to breath.
This is the
story of MY LIFE!!!!!
Author notes
I got some of the parts of this poem from music i was listening to at the time but i dont think i tried hard enough to show what my life is really like.
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Comments
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I can understand this write ~ the trick is finding a way ~ not to feel this way ~ but often times it can't be helped ~ I know ~ Short ~ and sweet ~ I did enjoy this write ~
Thanks so much for sharing your work with me ~ Best of luck to you ~ Thanks for entering the "Set the bar" contest ~ -
well if you dont think you did your best, then simply go back and try again- i'll look it over once again before i judge the contest.
thanks for coming into the second round.
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i meant what i said as a joke just like my life being a joke
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