birth of a child
this small life
exciting
responsibility
teaching them
ways of the world
giving them hands to hold
Author notes
5. I'm not a fan of free verse or prose, however, I am very open minded and can be swayed by the right poem.
AP mom or Big Sister
good luck with the contest!
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A contest entry
- LOOKING FOR AP FAMILY by Lil Ma 6969-.
500 points, ended February 20, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Babies and Parents by Billythekid.
1600 points, ended March 26, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You have said so much in these lines. It is such a blessing to have children and the responsibility that they bring is unparalleled. All we can do is our best and hope that we have done a good enough job. I love how the Title is used in the last line.Thank you for entering.
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lol my contest will be closing soon so good luck and welcome to my famil....even thou who i pick of my winner doesn't mean ur not in my family...everyone that entry in my contest is in my family aslong as u follow rule thanks you
Love Always,
Monica
AKA
~Lil Ma'
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this is a very good write. thank you for entering and best of luck to you in the contest.
im sure she is excited about having you in her family.
thanks,
Babygirl -
You can't have a child.
nope. nope.
lol j/k. random poem. These quickie contests are rather weird but I guess you're getting good inspirational poems out of them. -
Cute, and babies and all of us need hands to hold...good meaning within this short poem...less words say more, thanks gor sharing
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I like the way you write reminisant of e.e. cummings. Thanks for commenting on my poem. I appreciate it!
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Interesting how you listed all of the things to upkeep pro with natural due date. For some reason, I really got stricken highly by the ending line, and I can see why for you too because you chose that as your copy title. It can have two meanings, one support physically so they don't fall down with care never to be of the robotic stage. Two, it can be used as a symbol for when they become adults later on. That was very good, thank you.
I can use your time to enter this that fused into a poem,
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This is very nice precious goodluck to you in the contest best wishes and much love always
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Cute right too..
All the best!
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