at the end of the day
i will be me
but for now
you can
make me what you want me to be
because baby,
all i want is
Y O U
right now
how you are
and i'll take you whenever
i get that call
cuz baby
you are my world
you're all that i adore
so make me what you want me to be
cuz i'd change everything
just for you
to see me
love me
and... adore me
the way i do you
make me
what you
want me
to be
even though
i know its not right
Author notes
Prompt:
make me what you want me to be
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i was listening to family force 5 and they always have something to inspire a poem in their songs, so i decided to take that line right there and write a poem around it, as well as i can at least...
--
now dedicated to kerri
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hmm...though I enjoyed this piece, and it was great don't get me wrong, it seemed to be missing something there. Some points may have been a little clique, for I am guilty of writing a few lines that you have and many others that it just kinda clumps into a little overused.
Something little...though I can't quite put my finger on what. But I liked this a lot and will be running back to it for sure.
♥♥♥
P.S. You need to put your dedication in your Author's notes. ☻
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